August 03, 2008

(7 A.M. Sestina Draft)



Maggie May said...

the architecture of this is awesome!!
the ending pulls the last thread through with confidence, satisfying to read.

Dan said...

"It’s a thin line
between love and bribery at a bar."

"Sometimes I face
a life alone as my own best punch line."

Great lines. :)

Valerie Loveland said...

Love the end!