August 03, 2008

(7 A.M. Sestina Draft)

*poof*

3 comments:

Maggie May said...

the architecture of this is awesome!!
the ending pulls the last thread through with confidence, satisfying to read.

Dan said...

"It’s a thin line
between love and bribery at a bar."

"Sometimes I face
a life alone as my own best punch line."

Great lines. :)

Valerie Loveland said...

Love the end!