August 03, 2008

(7 A.M. Sestina Draft)

*poof*

3 comments:

  1. the architecture of this is awesome!!
    the ending pulls the last thread through with confidence, satisfying to read.

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  2. "It’s a thin line
    between love and bribery at a bar."

    "Sometimes I face
    a life alone as my own best punch line."

    Great lines. :)

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